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Like My Feelings Are Observed


 THE CLIMBING STARE: RIPPER'S RHYME
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Fear the hollow steps that follow you close behind
turn not your head, and gaze upon an inevitable fate

walk a much faster step, as does your racing mind
fear, and know only well that what follows, is nothing other
than pure of hate

Keep well your distance, and while the stare begins to burn
look not to return your glance, though, temptation will demand

No, turn not your head; turn, and you might then never return
yes, flee from that climbing stare; yes, flee from the evil at hand

Fear that hollow stare that will follow you closely behind,
and turn not to its gaze, and remain suspicious of its dare

keep well the thought of peril; keep peril well placed in your mind
look not to exchange a glance with evil, and fall victim to his climbing stare

 

*I have been intrigued many years by the mystery and story that surrounds, Jack The Ripper.  

 

 

Posted by Citizen Zane at 12:03 PM - 21 Comments   Add a Comment  
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I like that CZ....it has a unique rhythm and pace to it. Great work.  
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by ^BELLE^ (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 12:17 PM




As I read this, I could feel the hair on the back of my neck going up and I had to fight the urge to whirl around and look behind me.  
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by Keltic - HawkeyeMan (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 5:39 PM




Jack Be Nimble, Jack Be Quick, Jack Took Her Away From Me

He crept alone, silently, watching the fog pass in front of him. It seemed to wrap around him, as if the fog itself yearned to be a part of him, to be a symbiotic member. But the mist and fog that surrounded him was nothing. His mind and body were attuned to to the task at hand.

He exuded royal almost monarchical presence. From the long black cape that was tucked tightly around his neck, to the steel tipped boots that covered his feet. He was an amalgam of darkness and fear and light and noble. His presence constituted a awe that no person could avoid. His stature was elegant and macabre, all at the same time. Although there was no indication of his intentions, one would wonder if it were to save or to rape and plunder.

There were no emotion in his eyes. The coal blackness that spewed from his pupils was the presence of evil or determination. One could only wonder.

Would he hold a woman in his arms with the passionate love that seemed to burn in his being? Or would he hold her neck tightly in his hands? Would he hold a child, with the utter tenderness of a loving father, or would he discard it, unwanted and unloved? What kind of man was he? You would almost ask him, but to afraid to hear the power of his words as they exited from his vocal chords and pounded into your brain, echoing in your heart of hearts. He demanded fear, but asked for kindness and forgiveness. Like a killer bent over his victim, begging for his redemption with their last dying breath.

He was a man of the women. They seemed to gravitate to him, the attraction almost futile to resist. What was it that the women found in him, that they felt so comfortable around him, until the moment of realization. The realization that he wasn't what he claimed to be. That he was a much darker soul, and poisoned person, spewing forth the darkness and sulfur that burned what was once his compassion. But there was no compassion anymore. The weakness of his soul had eaten up all that he was until there was nothing left but a husk of hatred and malice.

This is what he was, and what he strived to be. A man of the women. A man that could have it all, and then take it away from her with a twist of his wrist. And the scarlet love that flowed from them to his feet, would be the psychological orgasm that he so desired. To watch the life drain out of their eyes. To watch with his wicked smile, the last moments of their life.

And he would turn, wiping the scarlet love, from his blade and disappear into the night, to do again what he could not stop himself from . . .

. . . loving
 
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by Adam_Warlock_2099 (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 6:41 PM




Love it....very cool!  
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by Miss Lou (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 7:09 PM




Eeeeeek !  
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by Lucy. (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 7:21 PM




Thank you! Glad you liked it, Belle.  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 7:53 PM




I really appreciate your comment, Keltic - HawkeyeMan.  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 7:55 PM




That's some terrific writing, Adam_Warlock_2099! Thank you for stopping by and sharing it. I love stories and articles on The Ripper.  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 7:57 PM




Well done  
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by Gina2 (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 7:59 PM




Thank you very much, Miss Lou!  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 7:59 PM




Thank you, Lucy!  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 8:01 PM




Thanks a lot, Gina2!  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 8:03 PM




CZ,
I have seen every program on the History and Discovery channels about Jack the Ripper. There is something fascinating about him. There is a retired Scotland Yard detective that has been trying to solve the case. I don't know if everything he says is the way it really was, but it does make sense. Sherry
 
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by Sherry'sCherries (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 9:21 PM




Well, now that tends to make the hair stand up on the back on one's neck, for sure! lol Good post, my friend.

Pup
 
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by Puppy (PM , CC ) on Thursday July 27, 2006 @ 11:53 PM




I've watched those documentaries too, Sherry. I found them very interesting! Thanks for stopping by.  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Friday July 28, 2006 @ 2:24 AM




Thank you, Puppy! I appreciate your comment. Take care, and get better.  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Friday July 28, 2006 @ 2:26 AM




Hi CZ......nice post. The Ripper was a scary guy all right. And I think he became more fascinating since they never caught him. I have don a little reading about him too. I love a good mystery.  
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by Coloconnect (PM , CC ) on Friday July 28, 2006 @ 2:54 AM




Thank you, Coloconnect! Mysteries are my favorites too.  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Friday July 28, 2006 @ 7:52 AM




Some people say that it was one of the royal family members that got a prostitute that he frequented pregnant, and the free Masons did the killings to cover it all up.. I don't think we'll ever know for sure, but its one of those ageless mysteries that never fails to capture the imagination of the world at large. great post CZ. Scratch.  
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Saturday July 29, 2006 @ 12:19 AM




I have always been intrigued by certain mysteries, one being...Jack the Ripper.
I assume you've read, "Portrait of a Killer" - Jack the Ripper - Case Closed, by Patricia Cornwell.
If you haven't, it's a must read!!!
Several of her books are based on real crimes. She's presently in the process of lending her expertise and financial support to help scientists solve the mystery surrounding the loss of the Hunley Submarine, 142 years ago.
I believe she will solve it.
Check her out, if your not already a reader of her work.

Your poem is eerie, haunting and RIGHT UP MY ALLEY!!!!
Excellent!!! Thank You for this post!!
Peace...Solid
 
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by Solid Ground (PM , CC ) on Saturday July 29, 2006 @ 11:08 PM




Thank you very much, Solid Ground! I have read Portrait of a Killer, and more than a few times! Cornwell is a great author. I need to take a look at more of her work, and thank you also for the info.  
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by CITIZEN ZANE (PM , CC ) on Sunday July 30, 2006 @ 8:26 AM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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